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H E A V Y B R E A T H

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CURTAIN

1.  Bright light on stage littered with miscellaneous rubbish.  Hold about five seconds.
2.  Faint heavy breathing rising in volume for about ten seconds, with the lights dimming progressively as breathing continues.  Five second pause.
3.  Slow exhalation of breath as light returns to original brightness.  Heavy breathing returns, light dims for ten second, followed by a five second pause.

CURTAIN



RUBBISH
Mostly newspapers, occasional smut rags.

HEAVY BREATHING
Urgent and desperate, identical in both instances.

EXHALATION
Orgasmic, at least.

LIGHT COLOR
Possible red gel, but never blue under any circumstance.
A parody of Sam Beckett's "B R E A T H" ([link]) done for my, ironically enough, parody class.
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newbones's avatar
AHAHA. I must say this is pure excellence. Very... vivid? Sexual undertones are always good, you can't go wrong!

I am not sure what else to say. I know that I like it very much.